i gotta love her face! way to go!

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Wow, you are very good in this too

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piękna ^^

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Huh... i just wanted to write a critique and then i saw that you didn't request any. So I'm gonna write it here!

First thing to say: All in all this is a very great piece. Although i normally don't get too much interested in linearts, this one arrested my attention! Her face is just beautiful, her clothes are really great (I especially love the shading you gave to the clothes... Well, maybe because that's what i really CAN'T do very good. ) ...

There are just some tiny "negative" things i gotta say about it: Her hands and her feet are too small for the rest of her body (don't understand me wrong, they're drawn really good... only - as i said - just too small) ..
And the other thing (just a very small critique because it's looking good although) is that she seems to be floating instead of sitting because of the lack of BG and because her skirt is falling like she is floating. Well, this could be intended too, sure I dunno about that. It only stuck out for me.

So, as i said, all in all i really love this piece! You gave a really good attention to details and to the over-all work. Will you be colouring it? I'd really LOVE to see this coloured...

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przepraszam za niezbyt konstruktywny komentarz, ale: WHOA *_*

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Nice! Love her hair, expression, and the details of her clothing. She looks very cheerful and her hair flows beautifully!

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danm, I didn't request critique, cause I thought "nah, nobody will give me any, it's just a sketch" xD

But thank you for long comment instead
I must agree with your critique about to small hands and foots. I remember they were bigger, but I changed them, because I felt they were to big XD
As about the floating- yes, she's floating, jumping, whatever, but she's not sitting. That was my intention.
And well, that was commission, ~french-toast wanted me to draw lineart so I did, and I think It will stop here.

Boże, jakie to jest...czyste o. o

xD

Bardzo ładnie, ma miłą twarz, ale ręce i stopy są trochę za małe w stosunku do reszty.

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wiem, wszyscy mi to mówią XD
chociaż mnie tak wizualnie nie przeszkadza. Dopiero jak sobie odmierzę proporcjami.